【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 O8 i( S" ^4 ]9 t5 L+ q我另将歌词附在此。
- \5 o' g" t& ?8 y# o. XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' B% c# ?* k, C1 `I already loved you with all my heart
! }* U: q, }  @" v( l$ \We meet and talk everyday,
8 l3 v4 l# \1 O* z8 E& h% r* X% T: wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; V- W  ?4 M9 f9 F$ ~1 ]0 EI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ A# h  |5 p3 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ }; t# l# V- w3 d/ {I want to confess that I love you,
7 I; _, R2 Y2 }7 rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; O2 A/ I& c3 \6 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ i8 \  l, v  Q( P! ^7 X+ ?$ s1 ?0 AEntrust my love within your heart
- m' Y! i+ [, F4 S# WLove… just the word love
+ Y4 I& P! j" `) MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- ]2 @$ B! z  r6 I. K3 pBut I never did
: k: m: y) z1 p1 {+ vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ e, W' x2 }9 m3 B/ M* A% ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- O1 c1 }  t( pCan I entrust it to you?
/ r2 w7 w! Q, VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 L7 w! H0 K1 j. P- x1 @' Z' @Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- G( Q( Y5 A9 K$ ]) G, e; T7 u# M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" C8 A* C6 Q# Y" A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 E, t5 n! k5 p& s1 P+ X: \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' L2 S# s0 E- H$ ?% Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 [1 G0 A4 i4 X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- ~! \8 p6 z0 l- `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 d+ n& U( v* y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 d* N4 G) ?2 V0 z6 b( u1 y% o8 X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 F& [& d1 A# A% R+ K/ b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 i, ?) F8 O' z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ X# p2 E- A* b* o: O+ \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 Q: z5 d" V' J9 h, G- H- }& }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 H0 k& U2 m% D0 d  P! Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 a  f2 |  }5 Y" X! w7 p0 M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- u7 U% E8 w% x% C; L; x<P>但我不会</P>
7 h' [+ }% D+ J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ n: P# e2 K" w6 S7 @5 ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 G: M$ p8 v" c0 e& e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# p$ z% I( I7 a) B; }6 P3 t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" W: N6 k% C' U1 y  L$ J5 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' ~/ r; p) T, u+ P& p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 a4 Y. n; a2 S3 Q4 m7 G4 D) [% d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; C/ D/ g. A) D1 E  S1 X7 M8 E, h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% ?! E9 B' v7 @+ l- `& ^, |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 _- C, o; ?- C( @% \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  p! v9 ^0 a) r# g7 }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ R0 L) s  V/ [1 d# ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t* d4 Z' a/ q# |* T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" C' o! r2 u, Y6 m, ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ N8 v' O  W' \/ w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 m! d# q. j; X" c' |' k  n<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>