【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, W7 S: K3 P) I6 U% ?1 Z" |) sFrom the first moment we met,
) D4 d$ x( D, O; f; F9 i, b' mI already loved you with all my heart
6 Q) p% p8 U4 E& ]& `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) }4 L- h4 ~, \6 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) }! F$ B2 t& \% I, rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ q5 o; n& z+ o/ OBut I never did
' M: P- T2 M9 S( n& T! D- m7 }$ FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! c/ V! Q! u. EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: G9 m0 H7 [7 @Can I entrust it to you?
0 p$ [4 O  V7 ^; U& K; {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" }9 O/ w* i7 a5 XI want to confess that I love you,
6 U1 s4 K) E: Y# d; \But I never did
9 w1 ^+ }9 T8 ~& gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 L* t7 n, b5 B. SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: z' t; b5 D6 j) ]5 i- t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& _$ ~) z9 M% l  i9 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' C4 v: z, B; d! k$ S9 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  C4 a: m0 `4 E: y7 ?; o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) J! H/ M# C/ v. R" k% \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ Q' U6 ^+ D# c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% l. `9 f" Q8 D$ n* F2 a  \, E; Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" T6 m, m/ j. b0 U  Q3 ~0 W' f. p6 ~, F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 g7 U4 A9 l6 z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( l: ^1 k7 R. Z  G* ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 t: v. q1 \" `7 |% M; d- |! i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* l- A/ R* U' T1 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  ]$ H8 }; A) m( ^* b2 B* b. @<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) |6 Z1 [7 a& z& s, T6 l1 \' w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 r6 h, u1 ^$ L/ ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ x. s5 Y# ]% a  @) M4 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ W6 q& ]7 O9 s) y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* g5 v9 e, Z0 F7 v4 V+ l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 s) T2 |0 R. \8 O7 ?7 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ A* J7 Q3 o4 b: V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 g# C/ a, T6 _, f  \; N0 w' d<P>但我不会 </P>
2 i% s3 [5 z- }4 _6 N1 n, T- j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- t9 U- k6 Y8 ?9 _. T6 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ N: ~! {7 v' T! ^1 {( u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ U3 h5 h/ ?+ E& Q2 h( A3 P1 p/ o, D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ b+ F" n! y. Z/ J' s3 x1 \7 ?' {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 A2 e% M  f+ X/ M' r( u5 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 }% M' U, _  ]* _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  N! ?& V# [& ?9 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( U, G1 M. K  M8 K+ [: n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>