【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 K5 _3 u6 U9 c1 C6 `2 H我另将歌词附在此。
8 Z  b! I. i9 E% x) N* @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 \& ~, u9 o* O1 y1 y1 a$ ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 F3 j- j+ k. l0 M. \& ]  ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 Q  D! \$ h4 e  h# k$ m! P  uIf today isn’t too late,
# z3 w4 `; d1 d1 L! U" j: PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) E! I% E5 z6 ACan I entrust it to you?
+ S; @, V5 N/ o# ]$ XEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ b5 j; \1 e% r7 y, Y; ]" hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 Y3 T2 s" B% ~: qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" {0 h! m/ e4 a6 M$ RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 B6 P6 ?# ]# a" DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( j/ e7 E* O/ S0 I# W( U  t) p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 o8 k* _* t, t& W1 a! z+ v! R5 K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' L2 A) e' c- {2 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ b$ N* B. F( A' `1 S  D, @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: F- l" s5 ~) O+ I! T% g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 `( L3 G% \/ h( f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% A9 Z8 G1 t. Q! N/ E8 X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; G7 |" n/ e$ M% [$ f, G4 ]% y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 U1 _5 m4 a9 b$ f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 e2 N# @) \6 Z$ n<P>但我不会</P>
) B7 F+ P5 W  v) P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 u4 P' G! L8 D( m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' Y  j. r. h0 N- h/ y$ A+ n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" B2 L9 R, i! Q# o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! M. B* Y* _: L9 F5 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- S: h& w4 Y8 w. p4 R9 y5 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 E* r7 s8 Y) s* p) n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) i1 K1 W$ ~$ k; G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- y7 v. J" J. i* a- T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 x3 h6 T' N5 ~0 y% C! q/ y* a) G1 l: U1 F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 V/ O5 |5 ?; g# Q) g* A% P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 r4 u: _& Q! R' u9 @7 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ k; Y! n* z  q% `& ~9 n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* ~0 h3 K$ o) M9 v, m, A7 |2 S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ T! Y' B  J. l) d0 |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 [9 x) e  J2 h% T, K% J! K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* |; H# k6 Z7 o! ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 d) U3 N' {. F% C( ]0 n+ u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' X7 ?) B4 _. @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) h, y$ l$ e; w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 e) v3 h5 t  a# P0 `; P4 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ Z0 l3 Z0 z) i6 t2 z& F- X" K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# b! G) u. Y6 u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>