【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
. V6 Z1 O* t. F0 {1 l( PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* r) C. O8 P. J# v: g9 |* `We meet and talk everyday,
: G- V+ }( l! {9 P- E7 M6 J5 X' ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 t3 ^* k- l% s, _# ?$ \I want to confess that I love you,
9 M, r: a# w: w# w( w9 o8 QBut I never did
3 a3 o) r0 {  G; u/ }! SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ ~: l( V/ I. W( fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- D; N' T2 p& v. e9 {; o+ WLove… just the word love
, b& u3 ~8 ^$ [9 C" A" m, dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 C6 v3 Z7 \. ?. Y2 Y! bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" L7 s# _4 Z; K9 Q0 w  UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ]9 }( u8 X! L7 E4 u8 GEntrust my love within your heart
! g0 ^  T6 o3 V9 `Can I entrust it to you?
2 r) S9 h5 P0 K( cEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; x7 R4 d/ C2 j) A: J/ m: Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 A/ j, R- k( j0 P: r1 R+ \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 w3 s6 Y, C) w) I4 M. Z' ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" p5 u& P2 B8 c0 k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 r  J% k, q7 T6 d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 f. r# p+ g# s9 u3 X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 t5 y; ~. ?- d& O9 [1 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# G+ W+ i/ U1 S/ d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. Z. Y3 U- @9 N$ H6 q! r1 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. c5 g! b9 t+ N" b; o) v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% w" H3 v+ P9 y0 d+ ~$ E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 ~6 d4 E4 M, t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; B. n, Y. P- Z0 y' R& S* e& x; J9 h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# D7 B9 R. y$ n4 h1 S2 u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% K: L& j2 @5 |7 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" d9 @! i) t* Y" V' P" C  U8 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 o/ {; X/ U, n% H/ t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 {1 J2 G" u- P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* m7 q% g8 b* ~+ x) v+ f1 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ {8 V+ m; Y7 L, x) E* \: S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 W* ~4 z# |$ [, k+ O2 N- i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& u6 x& U( ^% v8 |8 }7 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" N+ s8 X3 M' z3 I3 Z: `4 \( B2 y$ I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  A$ `# c( B) z' s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& s8 s0 _  O! i0 Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 e" V  C! H, u6 q: b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" y+ C) q7 N6 E( G4 Q- B  ^7 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 c; f4 g3 ?* j4 p+ s  o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 b" Q" B( m6 ]0 u5 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# b( T" N+ H! e( J' I; O! K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>