【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
1 M# @/ T" K( nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ m6 k8 C0 r) [: j# _% tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ F$ g1 {+ f" x# O- c- {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 E; e; ^  h* _  l" KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 V: b1 K- F* `2 z6 J* I, C- r: p- o9 L5 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' B1 B9 Z4 V* J5 `6 k" fBut I never did
" K* B  z& m. ~9 \/ vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- P" K& G; s. n; LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 o: Q% B% D% D8 I. Q7 l& }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  _: z6 v9 C5 i1 @/ ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" y- W7 ^! {  N, ~2 ?5 v" ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" ~7 A7 i0 O' X2 S- ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& D  b' w# I2 [" @+ I# q# g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ |" U" T5 ?  S6 D, l# x5 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, ?% l5 M' Q$ P4 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- v8 E" |$ P  y$ l/ B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: v4 O$ `4 f" s# S- ^" M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! Y6 T& b! D4 @% I1 C& e8 K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 z% R( a+ N5 H  j( c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ Z8 i0 h) q4 o! y, b/ `5 D<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 n+ r" E9 D: z$ {. @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 w& @( I- C1 ~1 E) p4 I9 r1 F0 s0 k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" ^5 ?) ?/ _! u9 u* C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% f3 P9 X* R+ {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) {# o' a1 J+ s; y; q# d6 c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 X3 }: s0 @: Y( M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! ?1 B" X3 s7 z- D. g4 f2 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, W. H5 J8 q9 _- n3 J& [3 M% R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. w; Y- U9 Z; m$ x7 w! C; ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& a1 L" [+ \# C9 F0 X& B6 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  b, H! L4 Y' n  t( E* ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ^* y. l: w; ?& ~- V6 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  [' c. E% \% i% h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' [5 n9 t! `- R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 i& P! F8 l5 |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ ?6 o) s' s2 }7 ^, Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, J/ W. g) n0 |: _0 f6 z1 l) r$ ]; k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 S; K- f' e5 T& \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 `. |# i( ^- \; |+ U6 v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ D; b2 `9 u8 e! ?. F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 I# C% u" C5 M! M4 o0 {/ g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 g+ S4 c+ C; Y2 q# G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) f9 L3 e; H# r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ A9 {( p& Q# X( F) r9 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' p/ h6 @: I6 \9 V. {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>