【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: Q% o* B* b% U7 b1 H' H2 N5 ~1 b/ x' AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ J( a- H- d% N9 I6 NFrom the first moment we met,
' b' o" Z  J: ]( s2 U$ k1 U7 Q* QI already loved you with all my heart
5 \9 c, I6 L, |' t' R. v3 X: YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* s4 H/ L* D- f4 t1 lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 X4 s: p' R: V9 P8 @: XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ^1 ]% ^, l3 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 c3 a( K! e7 _  h$ W7 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 d1 O! r! U. r* v' J6 p7 QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: l3 P7 u7 c# }% X. d1 R5 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Y. a' b6 q5 D3 eIf today isn’t too late,
5 X; i6 v" l4 M' P+ O/ p: N, m6 a; RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) f/ g* t9 q1 t. `+ G% h& ?2 PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ a/ X( c- ^- M  @; d; aEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, I- {- Q4 x# o9 j9 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 D( x5 j# f. ?$ K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 E% T  l0 X. [/ q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- T! ]% t$ z" }. r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 X# d% m# c+ k! g% o* I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" L! l+ @% h: I. y7 Q1 b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 V# D! K# M  w( r" \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 v  U/ v9 C* p. s* j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: Y3 [; L8 ?1 D1 b9 p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: }/ e: A' O3 W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( q* I5 h2 g% K% t: x: A$ v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# F) U0 t5 v0 X& }: w: y1 B* `( ?7 _, L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- P5 K3 D# R  p+ B3 g8 w) m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 ?) j4 Q# |- g. p& J3 l<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* B, a  G/ J$ j' _$ {! c( n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; X. g6 `5 @7 w. c! m$ }: w4 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 R6 f) L5 e4 C0 b/ \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' b+ s& o/ ]5 ?2 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, a- [5 S, Y. L# c  e' n  G/ b0 l( {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: i6 j% ~/ N8 i  }9 E+ V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& @: G: x2 R9 S# T  d$ a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! A, u4 U3 o* s" K, |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 L0 r, R/ E8 j5 [. A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 b9 l% b! o6 h* p7 F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( N) ?. r1 }6 S, i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 i3 U+ |; j2 X; X5 m4 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( R  k# @1 P& M$ i1 Z2 F8 ?! r; R5 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 X  x! g2 T- X/ j1 m! I+ T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  [3 P/ Y3 E+ n" d7 |9 |( u' W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& _" t0 p9 g. C* w; ~* x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* ]+ Q( U+ r$ u% Q* E. f% Z; [' E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 X1 ]6 _  j$ S$ D' I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 d9 Q% k" D# N0 s5 N/ }4 P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 i/ x( T. L4 S7 k6 i& R/ O6 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 r) a/ r6 }; O; \1 _. O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>