【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 U( A, D: ~. c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- C: v) _0 ?, U. i" u4 L& GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( n( ~3 \, x2 U, I* vFrom the first moment we met,
7 X) |9 i/ }* @+ d: RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* r0 \- l7 [0 V2 b, S$ c+ M, kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' F: ?2 B% ~! f$ V. u4 R! iI want to confess that I love you,
- V; X9 [* d  Z, L; S# m& M* p7 gBut I never did
8 s# C9 `  {7 N) w- COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 \4 c! _- E4 Q; z* {) d+ ]; _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 _* f. I9 C9 k) f) ?9 o& }# s$ y9 TEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 O2 o& j/ A% W" ~/ e  ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 `* |  Y- e1 Y' BCan I entrust it to you?
' m& V' u9 H$ K: N! LEntrust my love within your heart
5 N. ^9 A7 e. NCan I entrust it to you?
* {  U9 K4 {# ], QEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; {$ A" I) S8 p) T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& p  n% `/ |$ |  _2 N9 `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 L5 u6 A. o& @) Z% A# Y, |8 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 m$ B. w/ W% {! [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 I. J! t2 S! [1 k/ K/ k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 u  B: q, w  z/ H1 \! t" ]8 B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 W+ W5 \6 f: r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. j4 l+ e- ~( q" v) k6 a. \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ |8 r: P4 R5 F: D, f" n/ E<P>但我不会</P>
: k' R4 Q+ q- L: T  p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. s9 c: v. G* J3 e9 y7 }% b' @2 f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  |: V  N9 C. v: F# `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& q6 \; ], r4 J% U$ }! c) h2 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 I5 c4 z  j1 h  v' j& J4 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  I% {: f7 u/ m+ b$ m8 E- F9 z9 g; u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# Z; Z( A) B0 w) g& {* i7 f) n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. V1 s, a9 D" z* w- `2 a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* V6 E& Z8 w# J+ S& ?( G<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% G; ~! D- }5 N: m0 R% O" C1 \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' W7 e+ |9 d2 T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% h0 x, z8 z1 h+ J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 M: }) A* P# G2 t( Y3 \# c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# M3 y' k; |3 P5 l: F! k6 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' P. F+ F. U1 Q. H7 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" _' u. K, N" w) P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ m1 d) w/ S) G$ x( |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ t# F0 n& G+ k6 g! a2 X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: e5 E. y$ n4 ~$ m" V7 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  M' t  `4 [0 o% Y- W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 j/ {1 R9 z+ E8 X! l- a* Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 A9 R3 u1 H! D! s, J6 y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 G- e; N; B- C. k, _) _4 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>