【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
9 E8 L6 b7 O5 C8 Q, i9 L7 w) ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 u) v. c+ y' I5 V7 l) mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. r) M3 V- n7 t9 d4 B, ^+ T9 R' t0 ?5 Z) [From the first moment we met,
: {8 T" C$ W. n9 a7 P4 l& jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: ^% z! F6 ^* k! ]) CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% q$ h; \; j: @2 H+ X# ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 y  |  y' X# aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ I6 Q! z! P; O9 L! _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- e2 T* L3 g: h2 ]: w1 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; P# X9 P! Z7 [- c+ U) mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 }! F1 j# g% \5 M* B: v% |( y* a! oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: T* g! _4 U9 E8 ?2 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. a; K2 Y( u* Y$ q: }$ m" C' s3 c5 rCan I entrust it to you?
$ s% ^/ |: X' s& M( z$ m1 o' R" o& UEntrust my love within your heart
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+ W1 O0 l! V% Z: R3 m4 }3 ~1 ]! V3 S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; S+ M2 F5 d# u/ x( ]# u* }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 F  f, k4 y; {! ~8 l6 s/ o* b2 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. O& |) ^* f2 i2 P. w& g' y0 D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% w( L. O1 F! q7 T1 E2 T/ U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 l) q; t7 s8 r- x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 N$ _  {# z' N9 y4 G8 d' E6 \& L$ ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ Q7 _$ m; w) I. z+ {- |; a2 h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' I8 o) ~# U- w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ \# M: ~9 A" s# B( E4 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  O# G  v; }# j% v* X. A/ t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 e! J5 J  l7 V& I# @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. ?% W* |0 z( W2 o  Y% T% }. N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' m0 q9 Q4 T- e+ W- c/ p9 C5 E6 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ Z- c' b* n( E6 R+ k- t1 }! \; U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 C$ Z3 F" j  ?' q1 z' x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  C7 t1 _. ?3 W- ~# G5 F1 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) x! M, u( T& t) W  ?9 T; m1 s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# \' Z3 `/ q$ W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! }2 M3 j8 C2 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ c# s- F5 }% s# ^: ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 h  U9 S% Z0 a: ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% w. V6 D' i+ F& |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# Z& w( h4 b& t7 h3 o- }6 I' K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  S6 B: U& z; J& b, x* w9 J! Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  ^, p, q  w6 h* n4 B! U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 o3 h* t+ |2 t) d$ Z6 O  [+ g- T# g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 O) V$ \% L3 N  d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>