【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
( W& |8 e* ]0 o2 EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 P  I+ c0 s7 b$ [% }1 l- S9 OFrom the first moment we met,
7 s$ Z2 r$ H1 b) u9 Y+ \9 F9 X' v: KI already loved you with all my heart
1 I" k' @) z7 VWe meet and talk everyday,
' U% i( R7 Z" U# v+ r) hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 N* ?; X1 X1 c4 B6 SI would probably know how you feel
+ I: v8 X! Y( [! RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 @1 b* |: C: U' R/ {: jBut I never did
% l! `& S6 b8 e8 G* d4 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 Y) M; u2 P" V9 AIf today isn’t too late,
: B# I4 r. \# D* a" OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  E2 _* e, j% Z& U1 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- T) C$ @' t0 n$ h9 L$ y2 DCan I entrust it to you?
: n' Y, _+ h+ ~6 Y1 ^8 h0 FEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" \3 L! F+ c( h1 e) s' y# `9 p8 n8 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( l  a' M5 x. V( ~; E& G/ YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& ^& S% D1 ?3 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! W" Y# ^7 u; r7 G: b0 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# B9 Z: H* G' B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 a! J0 t# A9 @. p+ a% ^) C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* ]9 `; c2 v# `' [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* G' A. B" d8 i7 D1 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; K$ D- f) o' B  Y8 K. q0 ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ e6 m& @' u) E: {" w1 o) c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) O! N- f9 X( Q/ k& S& d' K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 E$ G" c5 I0 L, d5 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 x$ O% t0 m5 l. L7 |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# i, k: \+ {2 M4 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# _% X& t- x0 a1 e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! F* s3 S, d, @0 [6 j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: H. X; @: y  @; n+ d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; J4 _$ S0 {) m5 G1 O! j" J  `$ ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 e: Y  {# P6 I! H! e. ~) }6 ?4 A" k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 f. E0 d4 X: p0 ?" e9 d4 Q" J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 p( U9 a+ Y) B& T9 z. L$ t5 W1 e2 Y9 L/ N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 Y/ K* [4 E) O! w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 ]  l0 g* Q, s% h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 {0 m. \, u+ ~& b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) |0 |* p' }6 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 Z5 d2 p9 Y2 l, @* h" ^4 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: [1 S. m3 a7 ?& v. N& M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ m! W5 P: Z# I6 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" T  g' z9 D! M2 K2 r* S  f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 f) b4 A* [8 R+ I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ A) R" S1 c, I& X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 x9 h5 u! p  _7 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 W" Q$ c6 M. N5 Q: P7 r3 F7 D$ [4 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ a' n; n5 ?* w0 F, h' Z2 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 U3 L! M; R+ t1 Z2 M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; ?+ T1 X$ h- M- B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! F% Q9 b$ Q, {, d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& [4 l3 ?8 L& z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- [: S/ `/ G1 z8 ]* _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>