【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" |3 q! r7 k. u  J" j我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  k. M( H/ }  z& s3 T' G- U4 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 @5 ^( l) M9 ~/ f4 K+ c  ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 G( u; w! U/ ^4 n0 ?4 x" Z3 SLove… just the word love
1 m: f2 n' e& o( W$ bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 l0 v; Q. n. E7 a/ R/ R6 ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 h# ^, n9 S) yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; p6 G/ X7 u: }# V2 ]9 J7 aEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 V) F8 {- x6 _% }2 ~I want to confess that I love you,
6 T- e% S* D0 ^/ t+ C# GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" J1 d. r9 [( }9 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) P5 |6 K9 V8 b$ e7 aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 ?* ^. y) b3 W0 i$ GEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) W$ U' S8 ^* {) H% z9 z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. W/ ?2 u" t8 t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, a* b7 p: _5 y4 n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ b( b$ f+ k, i4 I+ Y: L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% v3 R  ~1 A- d! H6 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ q) j+ d$ i; n# t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% I& Q) D$ b$ {# x# q2 N: e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 w' G, ^" e. w8 O  ?, g5 h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) L5 F7 R* ?4 z7 d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 H5 m; f4 M1 R7 _# b) Y) t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, V, m! V: t! ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* C; f/ J# ?$ L; a; {6 R4 o<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: T5 {' P, ~3 C: Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 D5 j( R" q4 G. T( y) F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; L' n4 r3 R5 ~1 c5 y3 y% {. T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! v' y/ `0 z" `! @0 }6 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 y4 T3 l7 R) F. j' f5 ?. W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 L' G, ~* h, Y! G: f% E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 h; H; Q" G* [5 M' G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 o- M6 @/ j7 W8 b+ E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. s" B7 ?) p! n+ S  V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 Z+ T5 p- Z5 E; g* F# Z& i" R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 d6 u5 H8 q% U  D/ D3 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 s  u1 f" o7 {7 {1 j8 s<P>但我不会 </P>
* K, Y" q4 @1 Y4 b, n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 ?) b; Q4 R' T* C0 {1 d. k: x" d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: c! d' O: ], l$ z; c$ l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" ^( w+ i( e8 l; V: ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* k- D! d( W; D( t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' I" G1 T8 a# E/ B+ `6 J  F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: C8 v' \6 x, c1 T. g/ W$ M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; @! N+ Q9 ?$ ^3 m5 y4 g3 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 \% `+ x& m, T# z( f* Q; _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! M4 i9 M( l' c5 M! G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% q; h' }3 ]& O# @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! j1 c; W8 Z5 a5 |% R* ?- L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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5 n9 d" t0 C3 o2 t; w/ I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>