【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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" _& K5 f% w; W! z6 t! h$ K: d我另将歌词附在此。
( m2 @- ?7 f0 @0 v4 j( q; I! {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 s3 e0 o7 r, y) }" P3 ?3 y/ HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* T3 h! p, h7 @0 PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& I* z1 D- x% ?' QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 y  {9 h3 [5 n0 m3 O3 GI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' |7 F: C* R; ]0 }3 Z, `# @3 S6 P' R. ~Why is it so difficult to express?
$ E6 k8 `# ?$ _2 G& v/ VI want to confess that I love you,
9 w# k# Q, o  `$ t/ a  xBut I never did
  G% d2 O$ u8 m  D$ \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' D- W4 G* [( D. H9 j6 [$ iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ k0 _+ l1 T8 H( uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- w. S! _+ |' U6 w2 P8 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 M% D- b& Z, ?2 iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- m+ r# M2 |' s) r% K6 _Entrust my love within your heart

' y, y  Y4 T! p+ n) J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 D1 m5 ~# e& Y/ F% i5 ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 a& D, o4 Y, H& p9 i5 P) ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' h. c$ Z0 C# H- V) L7 i' |7 L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 S: S1 e# I! J* e% {$ {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- T# L. ^6 ?/ H8 ^" G1 P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' {+ ^8 |2 S' _9 {4 x/ @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 E0 t' M7 }5 m/ L/ x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' }2 V6 y/ w# T2 q! Y8 R# W" f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 A1 t3 I& K6 Y/ h+ Q( I( g# S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" \; p1 i" Y- E8 D8 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, @$ A% I5 S5 y4 _8 E5 H7 K, L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% ~. j% y0 Q% w1 g9 n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 z5 z/ p7 j8 ?3 d9 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 D; o# l& @# H' s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 m; q  B  U  v* j; A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 j$ s% H) l0 r) `+ i6 c- N. N<P>但我不会</P>
% H# p* \' n7 S- m5 w$ @8 h3 o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 p; E8 s+ n# U& p; A& {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 x, r) E+ ~' S2 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ~) t- j  d/ M- ~* ]4 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' L2 `9 h/ X+ d" u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 E$ L' ]3 o% {* l7 a4 u3 Y- N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 y# R$ b# `& S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! r3 p+ f  ]' I& B! ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ U) P# a( v5 x( w; Y+ B1 K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 U# x" a/ ~: M8 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' P2 x% r: ]! a5 h/ F3 O# W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 B5 ^0 D6 T8 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 K) L1 h$ r4 X) L( a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" E: ]& Y" H7 `' L- p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ A" N8 ~2 Y' O& F' J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' y4 V' U5 R7 K0 ?' w( G) X) ?  R6 b5 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 c: E4 J6 j+ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 }/ L  D, M& j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ R, _" ?2 s- R$ o4 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 z6 N3 |; S. l# ]3 J+ S7 o& Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; S$ u# Q$ W; t" r6 G/ U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>