【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 b/ q) H& z6 E; \: @0 N% W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. S* h9 @* L+ _# L* Q- TFrom the first moment we met,
0 y: H, }0 h( W( ]: q( dI already loved you with all my heart
0 d* Y3 M( N  v) g8 O4 Q* _We meet and talk everyday,
5 \2 V" G. A+ ?& J6 G! [1 ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' ~( E- E) x; D' S- _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 D5 V3 F: p: M: n0 z; ~# PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& S7 \& M  E9 M/ {0 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! j6 o" d6 Q* B. ^% |( T- n  rBut I never did
, h+ z3 A7 T+ GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 I7 H% Y1 v  P1 H. w* }8 yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: h, D" B' @5 F9 w8 |! UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. u+ _2 f/ J- c2 g  HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 \5 Q- G  L, s! k9 p4 ~If today isn’t too late,
* }5 ~& W, Z2 I5 u! `* @) cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* G5 Z' n' P6 V0 J# _2 c, RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 S1 Z/ z$ C; uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( @1 E% N& ~: j7 d0 o: A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' u1 c8 C! o" v3 h# Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; _& I5 ?6 U2 l7 u& Z! }) I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 D* e$ u- Y8 I$ w( k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 U0 e% V+ @" s( c% E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 M' V) B& N3 A' ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: y, q8 ^( b4 I3 W# V/ p- M9 ^- l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ T; t* G2 R' d4 `0 X/ n' O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; j! @" R. J) ]  [5 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: `$ V* J% K; @' i; t2 A6 U' d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ |  m$ W* A1 G. q5 @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# m' H5 S2 @3 F! S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 f% L9 m3 S) s1 R0 l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. |7 W' c) C- Y9 o, ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& F/ q+ C  T: b' u" H3 ?# q% L, z<P>但我不会</P>
% t4 R( l7 i2 a4 C3 e2 \- T* t9 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( I9 N( |/ E; b/ v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 x8 C- O! m% ]( y; m) N/ z6 o0 t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* _  j! V  s$ A! X4 T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" u5 `* q8 ]7 R' \' o1 ^% J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 w% P6 Z" {5 p( t2 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 Q0 ~3 t) K" c) T) t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# a! s: {4 ~, T9 I  V' ^& e$ C9 y; f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( a' u, {2 o" c6 h" ^' G; W" L! f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  R1 b4 m! e. c' l2 B& C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! R! g7 ^8 i% T; T* @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# |2 W5 o& s, }8 h" w+ M$ t4 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, e* e! i5 `$ H7 p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# D2 K8 ]/ t, @' ~% }% r$ `& P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 _# \' j5 x, }9 c7 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. S3 m. q! k  U4 G' t8 X& z" H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; j4 {" c8 `/ x; A7 ^1 `8 H% C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) _! {( K  _. H$ B# a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 [% o; Z* T+ E) h$ o. Q* K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>