【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, h: e/ b! o3 Q- `7 }5 O) G9 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. m. }4 }1 j% F3 L: B* dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% z: c% o; T6 W2 U, [% ~" g* NWith the moon kissing it every night
- X- N3 u% h, I5 tSeeing the sky content with its love
% P8 D" g9 {" ?4 o& a! PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( E6 c3 U* _% O9 j9 l/ j1 ANothing can compare to my love
0 l+ ]9 }! j* f9 k+ x9 Z  \( k9 j$ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  f/ j) g7 s* tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) Z: x; q8 P* k. t& h0 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ H8 Z$ J8 {- R0 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- T2 \9 U: o3 G" C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- f5 H* b7 Q4 N/ s% f, E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% h  u0 S% M* }$ v4 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* w' n" L& Z. X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. U+ j0 y3 n) \1 M/ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' [. K* V; a! q+ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  E2 |6 T) V7 n* w' E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 @3 `4 V8 I3 Y/ z$ h) f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 l4 k* ?) t( b6 G) ~2 W) ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) C! M8 S7 O' K+ Q/ L: N/ O- e& s- C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 F4 w# j2 ^: q- o( Z* M# s5 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ M( |& M  B1 d( s9 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' z* o3 w! a# f! @) p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 B0 M3 A8 I) T3 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 y( i3 A9 ^6 J, b" I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* ]  O- @$ N, _6 x4 p$ ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
# W1 o+ B- U/ w1 x) q3 Z" o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  {& q, B: _* v3 |8 y# Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, S7 |; a" [2 Y/ z8 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) o6 w1 c( {/ L8 N. V* r9 X  t& q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ ^* S/ n+ `0 ^- P) i6 G7 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 m5 m7 `6 b" ]# B6 K/ I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* s8 }1 E- W! ^% W  J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: D5 c& A8 W6 j, w  u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>