【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
4 i5 X1 U" I, v+ o+ X0 v, G6 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 E, j/ ~8 r8 x7 \8 ~1 _9 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' K# c4 h; }3 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( w6 ^1 j, _" SSeeing the sky content with its love
+ M- A) H  ]5 v. e& ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 I5 w3 Q& X. H' K& h! C! e5 b$ l8 E) Q1 CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: p$ U1 O2 G0 d* d1 I: BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 z+ A  b7 S9 f. X  WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% |2 t1 R# t& ]: }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 `+ i0 W8 P: {+ F3 w& S# l" A1 _I regret not dying
6 E4 W( X2 w6 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" a$ o4 j1 b- N" c  j  f# UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 C  L, Z% h4 Q7 F3 Q8 [3 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( F1 H" F. A' {$ m+ l' n! T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; J& t" ]0 f' z# W, \1 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- i4 g* _4 `, X( c" b& W* z5 o" ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Q  H+ E& B# s7 R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' t8 k! K) ~1 k" |! i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* G) a0 m" G: Z3 j0 D" ^$ t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 S5 g4 J3 U& a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. R% m$ K* t. Z; N  E! r$ k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 z2 c  ]) z: D8 a0 }8 Q( Q6 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' f! B* ^; I/ X" H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 g6 r2 }* n9 S. s: S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% Y9 d" O2 V) x# ?9 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ h7 ?3 e" u7 t# Z; O$ A) s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ }' {, j5 z& X3 N- w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 v3 r. a; \$ m% a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; `( N( |4 M7 E8 y; x: Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 r6 @2 d. Z, _6 ~4 a; m3 p6 V! M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 V  j9 I: c' N% V4 i% k9 W9 x' ^. A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" B3 ]4 c1 Q! {1 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 ~( q- h" I6 L6 ?# z2 f! V: G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; x9 u7 a) x0 M& t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 L5 [  h3 n7 I+ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. B3 [/ z8 ^: m) i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! }! N( M/ M* [/ ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- E5 l/ A0 U' U) T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* d% d/ p2 `4 A, e: ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; B. p1 H, b3 S* X: L& y; i<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 {# {0 X$ ~% n& T) x8 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 P% c5 I  j8 f* S- q: K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ B% x& x" t; e1 x8 `7 c' \0 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 u. a: W2 {3 }+ X9 g/ Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 V% u$ c8 }1 v2 j8 ]" e8 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& K8 r" C/ s  @& a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 e$ B1 v$ j8 R1 m1 \* ?! a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- J% ]6 |% W1 `5 X8 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>