【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ]8 z) K- E2 T3 \/ _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. t1 m/ [' x! C6 X3 mSeeing the sky content with its love
. }2 J4 {2 Q( B' L  ?7 {+ v. T% p) eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 e4 ^6 ?+ X, iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 M, M8 Q+ U# N! S$ {! F4 E: uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# q& I5 Q5 C& tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ {* V  m% A9 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  u: [  q( h0 ^, s! QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A8 g1 w- B% VWith such a tongue as yours,
% U- m, _4 c8 A1 Q( QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" M& O* [( d% B: O7 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! Y7 q8 M6 ?0 ^% o) s) o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 }( q9 O+ V! j, A6 k) l2 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) C: t  V* |5 W" @0 ]( p+ W0 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( E# J5 [' [5 U6 E* Z/ s0 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 J) r& e, ^! g, c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! X( [3 d, G+ I  b, x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% s4 w# {& z4 {, S6 c3 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 M3 T; i! ?: t" n* |<P>你无需担心</P>
4 x/ d. d  l6 c( a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& I3 A/ w5 H% n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ^9 N: l1 n3 ^+ y2 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 K7 {, e6 ^' F$ d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ~8 r4 W1 q' t  w, I/ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 v* t% ]  E, F0 o$ X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 v- Y! P8 q8 N% `( E- |- D+ w" |5 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 h8 Z- b- L* @! G$ @9 @$ f; \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 j! Y+ ~$ A6 [/ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ j2 F8 Q7 u" R, K- f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 U  N: q4 U  u6 M( }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Q+ b; \' {, \: r% g5 q1 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: n; x& |5 U- O# C$ G/ _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 b; l/ F8 d0 J' V& m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 Q  j/ P% j( G  b1 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ h0 T: n4 \- H7 C$ e( e4 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 k1 k5 c" f! j3 G) P; ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 W" z& q: g1 J' P/ v* o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>