【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ?6 a, D# R! z- |: sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \' N1 m7 I4 s8 d) ~+ `+ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& Z6 f' j5 c. {4 xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ n" T( y% H  ?' h, N) vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 f! Q/ D! K+ J9 Q, O7 t0 BI really want to know just how much you love me
, Q  X% ?+ v4 t( _  M0 A' {I love you I love you with all my heart
, T+ a, p. @. a; |6 X/ aNothing can compare to my love
6 H6 K0 N! ?" E9 I7 s% f6 }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 o" {8 F2 y, z6 V) ]: x4 `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 d* A5 t& B9 m% c5 c  w6 {4 wI’m still filled with fear
+ c* B' o  X( N2 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* r# B/ u3 p9 U9 _1 AI regret not dying
& ?7 i. Z0 t, x( I: A7 q! lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ o: s1 H4 y5 b& v5 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' [4 i/ D. C! M3 T7 ~# W+ p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 o& \2 J" p0 D( d$ J8 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# M/ E5 l2 Y) \4 T/ }# T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! T+ S3 \2 N  ^, I( R+ b% M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* U  {4 A4 |4 L) e; g' ^" W. l$ Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  t7 l# F# [3 f$ j9 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; `5 v" T: K6 B% j2 J+ t6 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: X+ T" t  u% s, K* u. R/ p& E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ s' M% w' Y# t% p6 V<P>你无需担心</P>
* p9 U) T5 b3 _1 x3 |+ H% R1 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! c, q, |4 K! k8 W4 {# o- q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! d  I& ^5 D  I6 @0 t# v" ~3 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 I9 s0 L! V0 G. G' v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( V; q( k" T: E. P' c+ I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; n0 S1 H& C+ B; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ]# X7 ^) l$ j- {; }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, \9 M+ Y) {5 }3 P0 M" f; c& e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- J* \8 b0 k) ^" j( c' J0 z8 I8 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- I# p+ ~1 L1 d- Y* [" S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; r( H4 [% W0 Z) ]2 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 n0 }( y0 W' |) `% P" J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ G& C1 [8 d: O# [1 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! @* G- C( Z  J- T9 k1 G) |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 `" R" c0 n- w6 x: C8 }5 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ~( k" n0 P% e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ p/ y. e1 I" g- q  J# \' F, ?% C6 B( r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 q+ d8 g) b7 o' a. P  F9 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) |+ ~/ Z% z4 y" S) O5 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# o/ o% ]% H- S( f. `* e, f1 p3 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 U$ E$ v2 w) d$ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 o- M9 z# o  h. [! B0 u& q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ O4 z  Y# N! s7 z! ^4 v$ J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>