【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ v$ `2 q" M7 a8 t0 c' k& ?歌词我附在后面。
3 S# m2 D  @8 E$ C& z* h1 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, Z  N6 R& ]: ^) gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 |% a5 o3 q: I1 {- W! G( p- bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 m3 z& m7 P, X3 |' @7 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 N1 e- a( I* ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 o1 T& Q# @* [7 d" U# k9 g$ x0 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: z6 ]/ [* r6 _. ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# f4 {, S/ ?) e0 H! K7 p2 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ]' G0 F5 |& h0 w. KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- y* Y( K/ x- j1 k9 T( {, F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 v, l7 g* ^! S' i$ B9 E: L$ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. C5 Q+ _  F3 J& G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ w* f0 ]6 ^1 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 w8 o' _. y  A5 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& k, D+ @  m. _# o8 @2 g& }5 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, o4 X# b' D: M9 J<P>你无需担心</P>
  E+ ]. X: ~& n" p/ a- |; g6 K: e' s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 @- m# V+ z; x0 P. y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% |" |& g  w( ~! }3 H8 _( I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 b1 X: A; v& g6 G" O2 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. V3 u5 T4 G' `# G! H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% S# a- c0 [) P# O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. Z% j4 q# d# s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% }* n. |" x  M, v) C2 F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( F9 f1 o" K' Q  k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ V2 _- o$ m0 N  i3 I& Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( f+ Z9 o  [* _: G! Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 q5 j  |; |' L6 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: J* s; m1 l$ q) q+ `: B8 D0 K0 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' V; [1 k# n8 }. O( c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 y6 X5 z+ u, j$ P7 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 j# J! c& R: B+ w, s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 [2 r0 L& K) s) R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 _1 y7 [6 [8 ~* b- Q  N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 t; m$ p( e' f3 X6 C! @4 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" ~4 `: @+ G- q9 Y9 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 V* }  j1 t; W$ W4 ?! q; ?' s! H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 y. ~  x. t. I& a' F  x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>