【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
% b# M; r4 W, I袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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- A# s# W  y1 s& k. uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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' }! |  t0 C; y- V8 \) ~  D* e我想我從未表露出
! X5 q1 C1 I- Z6 o  C/ o# O% A深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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* i, u- N2 {' Q' e0 t( D* V; LFrom the first moment we met,
+ h" Y) K& Y, n$ v8 vI already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
  k8 n1 B2 C0 P) F你已經深深的佔領了
' F. p) a6 `9 e! e我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

4 p" j0 X+ S/ y2 A縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 a$ k, D- p2 a, B3 @( [I would probably know how you feel
7 X! W  X" `6 d5 |; y' }' z凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
0 ]# Q; o" v) o我也許就能了解
你的心情
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( n0 i( P5 M0 |  s% \Love… just the word love
2 s3 m0 [* c+ ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
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# L7 _# R* h& {' ?* d愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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; m- B* ~) G4 g) i( f' u2 A愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& P. z. ?8 J; R3 d' D' [) d也許有一天
) [' _9 t! R  K* g- r' V: o  l你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
2 L* o' v0 D5 @& pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

; Q3 u5 S% n# g2 Q$ s- V$ ~7 l希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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& p3 G2 V# r5 Y5 I/ i5 s! b不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

  K4 S8 G! [0 a0 ~4 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
- \" Z8 q9 I% b6 R7 \  J$ i托付我的愛
收在你心裡

  }/ J/ |9 s+ tLove… just the word love
4 a# M" J# u# C. C6 |+ s1 I( r/ m4 lWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
6 f; W% x6 D# b; d: Q2 [為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
- R. l8 l( Q9 |/ h, J/ P) O2 }0 V! JBut I never did

7 x3 U& n8 R" b" w- s愛你 我想要告訴你
' q. k6 A1 O- ]7 `8 ~4 F9 C卻還是說不出來

: J( q8 N0 x. w! W3 p% ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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: {" b8 C$ y1 b  ]) N/ H5 A9 @5 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

/ p" W- B: {9 [Can I entrust it to you?
: q0 }3 i  P/ ]1 v  ~9 j5 |. }Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
6 ]) B* t' y, q' q托付我的愛
5 Z' R. j, [* T2 n4 O  U收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
! m' N6 X9 _( N& o  BEntrust my love within your heart

+ p$ u; L; ~- p' W( R7 d可否讓我托付給你?
0 k6 y" I" @2 d% m托付我的愛 收在你心裡


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5 f2 J  W" j0 j, `. M: W5 Q' [, R对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
: l- g2 i8 p4 H7 `! SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 n$ n1 t( i$ O- {* }3 h% z: ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
5 ^) s" ^5 H) h8 B2 W! Y" y; M1 c天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
2 m  Z8 n* ]1 e- {& _- C/ b我心充滿快樂
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& t1 J' l- `5 L7 E6 r0 k* k% lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 @4 H9 T8 d! M7 E7 R$ v0 u+ fSeeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
- y/ _- ~& ?  [8 W" q/ m% A; a" C7 {月光輕吻著夜幕
, c: U; p/ Y- _8 E星空充滿著歡樂

: K% i! l# d, f$ a+ v8 L, ?It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
" v8 g6 c' g* a  f. T, j0 l我心充滿著歡欣
2 G7 i6 A$ P5 E: {  m8 \3 d愛你
堅定不渝

& ]" H' ~# v- t0 S: j9 lEvery other word you utter is love
/ t" f6 m( M* N6 W$ zI really want to know just how much you love me

4 Z" {- e9 C. A2 `你的一言一語都是愛
% p( H, H$ N0 N! h我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
; |' D( L: c5 |: o' o你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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1 E# z# D# E: _) _5 n% q8 h( ]( l9 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

2 H0 K9 V5 a+ A9 ^$ ?! Z能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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- D2 ~  S1 {, QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

( A  R; X( ^: c( k3 d: EI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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& t8 D- N$ I0 s. U. K/ XI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

' k: }- N% z0 J8 }; g9 x; ?我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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$ z! D" C0 |1 H. Z5 Q我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
# q5 B: b0 H) R& ^It’s nothing close to 100,000

, S- [+ ^- p/ N- }& q5 A# t可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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8 E+ b% X5 ~  K  k; C' g: X$ \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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$ b+ c) [3 g( J" \/ m! d這樣一張巧舌
% V; B7 o. H0 j: I4 G* e你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' Z4 D" A$ T+ d  K( s9 B0 ^如果我真有千百張口
+ z! \1 a# S- U$ X! k0 R我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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/ r* T2 ^# Y) ?4 l5 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
3 \9 _7 o" R! X1 d愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

9 n9 Z( j1 e; i5 r0 \是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒